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The Dance (Origins: 1890's):
"The Serpentine is an evolution of the skirt dance, a form of burlesque dance that had recently arrived in the United States from England. Skirt dancing was itself a reaction against "academic" forms of ballet, incorporating tamed-down versions of folk and popular dances like the can-can."
"The new dance was originated by Loïe Fuller, who gave varying accounts of how she developed it. By her own account, which is widely reported, having never danced professionally before, she accidentally discovered the effects of stage light cast from different angles on the gauze fabric of a costume she had hastily assembled for her performance in the play Quack M.D., and spontaneously developed the new form in response to the audience's enthusiastic reaction upon seeing the way her skirt appeared in the lights. During the dance she held her long skirt in her hands, and waved it around, revealing her form inside" - From Wiki
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Pretty great! The song's very rich sounding and it progresses enough to keep me entertained despite it's length. The video has some well synched momentsand unique imagery.
Perhaps you overused the effects a little. I'd probably prefer something that experimented more with a smaller pallete. The sort of TV distortion at 2:03 for example i felt was incongruous and cliched.
I don't grasp the significance of the final shot.
A fun experience regardless!
LLAAPPSSEE (Updated )
Thanks for the words, man. Much appreciated. I've had this idea in my head for some time. So it's nice to get it out.
I can see how the effects may be a bit overwhelming. My lack of skill with video editing; hope that it wouldn't get boring; and unfamiliarity with the effects, caused me to just hit the video with full experimentation. I was just trying to wrap my head around the software and what I could do with it. So I was messing with a lot of the effects and playing with the tools. I knew the tv distortions were a bit cliched (I sadly, couldn't help myself, haha). I liken it to the use of Photoshops leaves brush. Ha. When I begin my next piece It will be a bit more focused and a little less chaotic. I was thinking about making short music pieces just to practice.
The final shot is a clip of Apollo acceding from the moons surface. Just a piece of of "farwell" imagery to end the song on.
Thanks again for the critique.