i would like to see where this is going. Very interesting idea and im assuming the correct answer is not going to be "why not".
When i first began reading (the first page) The structure caught my attention right away. the first two maybe even three paragraphs could have very well been poetry for no other reason but that. Its nice to read something so refreshing so i will be waiting for the next page.
toxicdog
Some would call it a stream of consciousness, I would say it is a waterfall. It's like a complex mixture of reality/fiction/dreams, and everything in between.
LLAAPPSSEE
Heh-heh. I like that. A waterfall. Maybe like an ice-shelf breaking off?